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OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

CHECK MY GRAMMAR PLEASE!! Everyone hates something about themselves, whether its their eyes, hands, or height. Mine just happens to be my nose. I hate my nose because its crooked. Having a crooked nose is to my disadvantage because I have breathing problems, I am an actress, and I would like to be a model. Crooked noses are DEFINITELY not your friend.

OpenStudy (aripotta):

it's*

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

is that all?? r my periods and commas correct?

OpenStudy (aripotta):

yea, i guess so. you have two "its" that should be "it's"

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

ok... thank you sooooo much!

OpenStudy (aripotta):

mhmm no problem

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