this is for an assay please look this over and no it isn't done, this is the first paragraph

hearts
The heart, what is this complicated phenomenon? To find out I want to know the different parts of the heart. I want to know why is the heart so important to me living. I want to know what causes heart attacks and why is it so deadly. My goal is to find as much information I can about this organ called the "HEART".

there is my first paragraph what do u think what
can i change.... i take criticism VERY well so say what is the truth.... please!!

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this is for an assay please look this over and no it isn't done, this is the first paragraph

hearts
The heart, what is this complicated phenomenon? To find out I want to know the different parts of the heart. I want to know why is the heart so important to me living. I want to know what causes heart attacks and why is it so deadly. My goal is to find as much information I can about this organ called the "HEART".

there is my first paragraph what do u think what
 can i change.... i take criticism VERY well so say what is the truth.... please!!

anonymous · Answer

please some one help me!!!!!!