Question

Can someone please proofread some of my essay

Answer 1

Wrong subject. Go to http://openstudy.com/study#/groups/Writing

Answer 2

I wouldn't mind proofreading. You still there?

Answer 3

@ta123 ??

Answer 4

Here the updated version Zordoloom

Answer 5

Comments clear so far?

Answer 6

yes

Answer 7

Alright, well i'll stop there then.

Answer 8

Or should i continue?

Answer 9

if you want, but there lot of mistake, so going to take time for me to fix all them

Answer 10

Well, I'll see how much i can do.

Answer 11

Thanks!

Answer 12

Hope you realize how much corrections there are.

Answer 13

*needed.

Answer 14

You got good flow, you just need to correct some common mistakes. Look at the attachment.