Question

Hey guys so I'm trying to write a short 6-8 page fiction piece for an assignment. It's supposed to be completely concrete and have absolutely no abstract stuff in it. I'm having a bit of trouble describing the bedroom that my two characters are siting in, especially with how to describe the side table. Can someone help me out a bit?

Answer 1

This is what I have so far:

Blue walls, a deep turquoise blue. On the walls hang little paintings, with inspiring quotes on them. A single bed against the window, a green shag rug. On it sit a guy and a girl, huddled around a laptop with coffee cups in their hand, leaning against the bed. A mirror hangs, on the adjacent side of the room, framed with faded pictures and old memories. In the mirror, a reflection can be seen, of the study table, cluttered with books, medals and trophies as if to hide the girl’s various accomplishments. The boy reaches over to the dark oak sidetable beside him, slowly sliding his fingers across the smooth surface, stopping now and then to touch the various trinkets that sit atop it.

Answer 2

any ideas @wombat @jagatuba ?

Answer 3

Hey @chelsea.dorsa If you're just chilling here, reading my question anyways, could you help me out a bit?

Answer 4

I was actually just trying figure out how to navigate this website and left the page up. Sorry. Though perhaps you could add in a chaise lounge and describe an item draped over it or the material it was made with. The color of an extra chair. The shape of it. If it was new or antique. You could talk about the floor is it carpeted? What type of carpet? Is the floor wood? What type of wood is it made from? What kind of bed are they sitting on? What is it made of? Wood? Is it a water bed? How about the walls? Do they have paint of them is the paint flat? Are the walls wooden? Do the walls have wallpaper? What is the condition of the wallpaper? Could it be peeling? What are your characters wearing? Any jewelry? Does the jewelry have any significance to them? Relgious, familial, or even romantic? Answer those questions with detail and that part of the story can write itself.

Answer 5

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Answer 6

sup shay did ya gey answer and help or you still waiting

Answer 7

I'm still waiting a little bit. Although @chelsea.dorsa did leave some good advice. I'm just wondering now, if what I have up there sounds okay or weird?