Question

Hey guys so I'm trying to write a short 6-8 page fiction piece for an assignment. It's supposed to be completely concrete and have absolutely no abstract stuff in it. I'm having a bit of trouble describing the bedroom that my two characters are siting in, especially with how to describe the side table. Can someone help me out a bit?

Answer 1

lets see, i don't know what color the room is or anything, but if you want me to, i'll try. :) you could say 'they sat in the room, which has peach walls, a brown couch, a brown reclining chair, and a television. the room also had a side table, which was very pretty, considering the style of the bedroom. the side table has 3 legs and a round flat top, but it wasn't like most side tables, it has designs on it. i couldn't quite picture designs but if i had to say what i thought it was, i would have to say it looked a little like dragons! yes, i said dragons. isn't that just the oddest side table you could ever see?" :) hope i helped (i love to write, like everything, hoping to be a writer someday)

Answer 2

Actually, this is what I have so far:

Blue walls, a deep turquoise blue. On the walls hang little paintings, with inspiring quotes on them. A single bed against the window, a green shag rug. On it sit a guy and a girl, huddled around a laptop with coffee cups in their hand, leaning against the bed. A mirror hangs, on the adjacent side of the room, framed with faded pictures and old memories. In the mirror, a reflection can be seen, of the study table, cluttered with books, medals and trophies as if to hide the girl’s various accomplishments. The boy reaches over to the dark oak side table beside him, slowly sliding his fingers across the smooth surface, stopping now and then to touch the various trinkets that sit atop it. The girl watches as his mouth contorts into a soft smile before he turns his bright blue eyes around to face her. The girl She lifts up a slender finger to flick the long, black locks of hair out of her face. The charm bracelet on her arm jingles. Goosebumps can be seen on her bare arms – below her white lace cardigan. Below her white lace cardigan, goosebumps. The boy guy shuffles over and reaches back for his grey sweater and swiftly puts it around the girl’s shoulder.

Answer 3

whats the book?

Answer 4

It's not a book. It's just a random short story/ scene that we had to write up

Answer 5

i think that sounds good :)