I really need help with a good thesis statement... can anyone help?

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anonymous · Answer

@shadowfiend

anonymous · Answer

"Peak David" on YouTube posted this (he has excellent videos): http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=-e2EthZC0aU I also like this next one because it reminds us not to write generic essays. Its thrust isn't for your traditional college essay (which can be rather formulaic), and so the essay can be more...lively, unpredictable. He is talking about the College Admissions Essay, but I think the points he makes are still valid: http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=GN-KfleJB08

anonymous · Answer

what is your essay about?

anonymous · Answer

Thanks for the help you guys im done now though she may say that i need to make it stronger its a research paper on gun control and its unbiased.

anonymous · Answer

whether we should have the right to it or not.