I need help editing a paper. Can someone please help me? It's about the No child left behind Act. It's a persuasive essay, and i've been having trouble on what to put in it. I'm arguing against it.

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anonymous · Answer

Have you started writing anything? Have any ideas so far?

anonymous · Answer

Yes i have, I've actually already written my whole entire paper that took me about 5 long hours to complete, and i still haven't even completely finished. I would just like to know my flaws and if I'm doing anything wrong, It seems like every time i do write a paper i can never make an A. no matter how long it takes me to write an essay.

anonymous · Answer

Oh ok, well I actually have to go im baking some cakes. Happy thanksgiving though! Sorry couldn't help!  =]

anonymous · Answer

If you send it to me somehow, I can look through it for you :)

anonymous · Answer

How would you like me to send it? Thankyou so much!

anonymous · Answer

I am pretty sure you can attach pictures, word docs and most other Microsoft Office Documents.