Question

Take a look at my New Poem! Hope this inspires you guys:)

Answer 1

*THE THANKSGIVING DINNER*

I swear life can change in the way people are living
But sure I know that will refrian on this day of ThanksGiving
I sure wish all of my friends the best, and hope they stay strong
Because today its time to forget about all the bad things you done wrong
Strangers and enemys and friends that gathered together
I hope you listen to me now because it will only be for the better
Theirs a big table ready for you guys so please take a seat
Passing each potter around with delicous foods to eat
Theirs Mac&Cheese and the pudding looks so swervy
Ohh and never forget about the Grand prize*The Big Turkey*
The smiles will never fade and the love for filling heaven
I pray that no one will forget this dinner that was surved on Nov the 22nd:)


~Young Juice

Answer 2

Nice poem

Answer 3

Thanks !

Answer 4

ths is the stuff man

Answer 5

Its Good ;DDD i like it

Answer 6

Nice bro!

Answer 7

omg so nice i love it i suk at writing poems

Answer 8

Writing poems is easy. All your doing if expressing your feelings, It doesn't have to rhyme either!

Answer 9

thanks ill try ill give u one and u tell me if its good...if u want?

Answer 10

Ok sounds like a deal!

Answer 11

pllz tell me wat u think

Answer 12

ok here it is: TEAR DROPS
some timesi wana ask god why i cant cry
i watch the teardrops fill my mommas eyes
they hit me lilfe like a bullet shot
i know the pain i caused in her life has to stop
i would go to my knees and pray
but i didnt know what to say
- Joanna Ramirez
thats all idk wat put next i started this awhile ago bt idk im thinking of this more

Answer 13

Its actually good!

Answer 14

seriously i dont think it that good it was a quick write

Answer 15

Well believe it or not it is! You should do it often!

Answer 16

really thanks haha ill try haha i just write stuff i need to let out

Answer 17

ill do more later k ttyl bye

Answer 18

i like it alot

Answer 19

good poem boo:)<3

Answer 20

Thanks;)

Answer 21

ur welcome:)