Question

Brand new song by Justin and Elise

Answer 1

When you've been gone for a day
It feels like you've been gone for a century
ohhhhhh
I can't think when your not here
I can't bare it all alone
without you


baby I'm only gone for the day
I'll be back either way
I'm never gonna leave you
It will always be us two
I don't ever wanna leave you


Boy you haven't been around
So when you gonna come around
Oh, cause I miss you
You've got no clue
what you do, to me
you make me feel like imma queen
and your my king

lets go to my castle
you'll always be my queen
I'll always be your king
lets make it official
here's your ring
baby boo its your time
just sing!

OHHHHHHHHHHH
I can't be without u boy
Cause without u, I ain't nothing
This crown don't mean a thing
unless you and I are together

Answer 2

;DDDDDD

Answer 3

wow haha

Answer 4

now just gotta sing it.....

Answer 5

this is really awesome, i like it :) lol you deserve lots of medals for this!! good job :D

Answer 6

thanks

Answer 7

who came up with this? and i wonder whos gonna sing.. it'll turn out amazing :) :)

Answer 8

(i wrote part of it lol)

Answer 9

the rest of the credit goes to Justin!

Answer 10

oh cool, its great! :) you guys did an amzing job i like it :D

Answer 11

lol amazing*

Answer 12

ha thx well if it were not for Elise this song would have never happened.

Answer 13

You both have skills, and this is an awesome song :)

Answer 14

ha thx @Alyx_da_Boss

Answer 15

np ;D

Answer 16

WOW! I give you 1,000 out of 1,000 <3

Answer 17

Thanks!

Answer 18

This looks amazing so far! Definitely continue and make it longer!

Answer 19

Dam J nice rap parts and nice song Elise!

Answer 20

Thanks :D

Answer 21

np girl

Answer 22

there was a comment about making it longer, but i thinkt he problem is that you dont have a chorus. your lyrics are awesome, you just need a chorus that is in between each verse. that would make is longer and more interesting. i would suggest a up beat, quick chorus that has like 2 or 3 lines and then one line at the end that you repeat. it is super cute too (; preshh

Answer 23

ok how about this for the chorus then....

You are my oxygen
You are my life
And without you all this is
is a lonely love, a lonely love

(lonely love is the name of the song)

Answer 24

Perfect!!! Like exactly what the song needs(:

Answer 25

thanks :D

Answer 26

@evergirl I POSTED A NEW POEM

Answer 27

I DO LOV YOU POEM @JUSTINR