Question

~.~.~.~.~.~IM GONE AND REVIVED.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
15 year and im still breathing
wondering y i havnt made home base
i walk and feel someone following
i turn around to see a gun in my face
to quick to see the owner but i see my life flash
i fall to the floor gasping for air
will i live or go to heaven in a flash
lights go out im wondering were i am
i see im at the hospital but i see my self in bed
how is this possible i dont no who i am
my mother sittin there with my hand to her head
i cant stand to watch her in pain
plz take me back i wont do it again
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Answer 1

light go out then i open my eyes
i hear my heart beat
and i see my mother rise she has a smile and but she cryed
i tell her ma its gana b alright just take a seat
i wake up to see real life i rather swallow my pride
than to see my mother cry and watch my swallow my blood
my mother told me how my father cryed
that he saw the staind and knew it was my blood.
-Joanna Ramirez

Answer 2

Wow this is really good :D

Keep it up ~

Answer 3

THANK I JUST STARTED HAHA:)

Answer 4

Really? You're really good! Deserve to make a music video lol

Answer 5

`haha i dont have the equipment to do that haha but i wish

Answer 6

Can you sing???
Should post stuff on youtube.

Answer 7

well a little but i dont think my voice is good enough

Answer 8

nice anaheim

Answer 9

Lol have you recorded yourself?

Answer 10

no haha i dont have time or equipment and im shy

Answer 11

thanks @drummerboyswag

Answer 12

np

Answer 13

:)

Answer 14

@drummerboyswag hey fan my and you to @iNeedTheHelp

Answer 15

im edit it

Answer 16

nice

Answer 17

i hope this inspires you guy to never make your mother cry
"a woman brought you into this world so you have no right to disrespect one"
-tupac

Answer 18

Nicce!

Answer 19

haha thanks

Answer 20

No Problem!

Answer 21

haha icant believe u guys like it in beginner

Answer 22

i try to do more im starting to love it

Answer 23

Yeah Writing Poems Will Really Free Your Mind!

Answer 24

yeah it does haahha i am do yep new poet here

Answer 25

hopefully i get support from my family

Answer 26

You will, everybody loves a Poet:)

Answer 27

haha i hope i would be so happy to be a poet

Answer 28

someone give me a subject to write about i wana c if i can write about anythin else

Answer 29

when your angry,or upset

Answer 30

thaks thats one @drummerboyswag anybody else?

Answer 31

WOW! You have real talent, nice job. (: