Question

Can someone read my essay and help me revise it?

Answer 1

Well, you need to post it, so people can see.

Answer 2

I just skimmed over it, good job on the wording, what type of essay is it?

Answer 3

this isnt too helpful

Answer 4

Yep, I am not sure what u are trying to fix, if u gave specific stuff, I could help.

Answer 5

I need a new title

Answer 6

one that fits my essay

Answer 7

Okay, not my strong suit, but I will see what I can do...

Answer 8

okay thanks!

Answer 9

You r welcome!

Answer 10

The original title was..?