Question

new poem: they told me to write something about when im angry so this is how i am

~.~.~.~.~.~Hate & Hidden Emotions.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
When hate hits my mind
I cant control myself
i feel like a tiny devils controlling my insides
its like i put the bible on the shelf
and brought out a 9mm pistol
my conscience shuts down
my hate is bigger than bristol
this hate just wants to see you on the ground
my hate is uncontrollable
because love isnt provided
but doesnt mean its unstoppable
love is all i need for this hate to be divided
I got love in my heart but envy in my mind
.....

Answer 1

but the envy is for the ones who hurt me
i stay silent but my emotions are trapped inside
im just waiting for someone to listen to me
to listen to my small story and go throug the motions
for its just hate & hidden emotions
-Joanna Ramirez:)

Answer 2

@AnaheimNena714 who told you to write that?

Answer 3

i asked for help on what i should write on so i came up with this...so guy i forgot what his user name is

Answer 4

So your turning this in as an assignment?

Answer 5

you're*

Answer 6

no i just love doing poems

Answer 7

bt i hate this one it just hurts

Answer 8

Yeah, it sounds depressing and scary....

Answer 9

yea you wana see another one?

Answer 10

Yeah sure.

Answer 11

ok let me try to make a new one give me a min.

Answer 12

ok here:
~.~.~.~Jessica R. Novelo~.~.~.~.~
i remeber when she was born
it was 2002 she was a beauty
my heart was whole and not torn
she looked like me, what a cutie
i loved her no matter the trouble
she always cryed and got me busted
her smile is lovable
she played with my old toys all dusted
i get angry but i love her
she so cute and small
she just like a teddy bear
she stand on a chair and says shes tall
im glad she in my life
i no shell be respected by a mister
as long as in my body theres life
i just love my sister
-Joanna Ramirez
what do u think?

Answer 13

Awesome!

Answer 14

thank haha i was staring a my sister and i poped in my head:)

Answer 15

Hiya - Remember Open Study is about study. This question is closed as it is not a study question. Please keep questions study related.

There are lots of other communities to could post this kind of thing in if you are having trouble :) You could try places like Deviantart and other discussion forums.

Answer 16

i am im studing poetry and want to hear other peoples opinion

Answer 17

In that case please post in the writing or English sections :)

Answer 18

hmmmm..

Answer 19

i didnt i put it in music and openstudy feedback