Question

New song I'm working on....

Answer 1

Here I am, standing here
Is it you or is it me that I should fear
The look on your perfect face
Tells me your heart and mind are outta place
A tear slips down your cheek as I reach out with a smile
And a twinkle in your eye tells me that it’s been a while since
Someone’s shown you love
Since you’ve got help from up above
Since you’ve got up when you’ve been down.

Cuz it’s your tender love that I miss everyday
It’s that smile and warmth that got me through the gray
And I miss your sparkle, your wonderful smell
You’re all I can have; now I’m under your spell
I know that I don’t always finish what I start
But hold me tight once again and I’ll patch up your heart
And booooy….I just wanna love you.

Answer 2

great song

Answer 3

Thanks :)

Answer 4

great

Answer 5

But i suggest to add something to the last line, it seems little incomplete....but the song is really great :)

Answer 6

Thank you! I'm not done with the song so I will change that line a bit

Answer 7

wish i could hear how its suppose 2 sound

Answer 8

ya i'm trying to make a tune and incorporate guitar or piano.

Answer 9

oh cool

Answer 10

I love this, it's incredible! :p

Answer 11

Thanks!