Question

can you revise this topic sentence, remember it is not a thesis.

I believe the lunchroom could be improved.

Answer 1

Many things can be improved, such as the lunchroom.

The lunchroom could use some improving.

I think we need to improve the lunchroom.

The lunchroom should be improved, I believe.

***Those are just some I can think of right now... Hope that helps! :) Good luck :)

Answer 2

Thank you!

Answer 3

ur welcome :)