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OpenStudy (anonymous):

can you revise this topic sentence, remember it is not a thesis. I believe the lunchroom could be improved.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Many things can be improved, such as the lunchroom. The lunchroom could use some improving. I think we need to improve the lunchroom. The lunchroom should be improved, I believe. ***Those are just some I can think of right now... Hope that helps! :) Good luck :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank you!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ur welcome :)

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