Question

CAN ANYONE HELP PLEASE??????? ALLITERATION
here is my poem
Life is a gift that we have been given, Life is so Amazing when its shared with the ones we love, Life is something that you have to enjoy for life is too short to always fight and to always have hate in your heart, Life is a gift that you should make the most of, Life is a gift that has been given to us even though it’s really short, So take time outta your day to be thankful for you have been gave the life you have, Because many have been given life but so little have embraced it. So I ask you what you are going to do with the lif