How would you punctuate the following sentences?

One parent was particularly adept at the skills she had learned giving me the opportunity to see not only the use of these techniques but also the impact they seemed to have on her child's improved communication skills.

She explained that clinicians can support parents not just by telling them what to do but by demonstrating techniques within their daily activities such as hand washing.

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How would you punctuate the following sentences?

One parent was particularly adept at  the skills she had learned giving me the opportunity to see not only the use of these techniques but also the impact they seemed to have on her child's improved communication skills.

She explained that clinicians can support parents not just by telling them what to do but by demonstrating techniques within their daily activities such as hand washing.

anonymous · Answer

One parent was particularly adept at  the skills she had learned, giving me the opportunity to see not only the use of these techniques, but also the impact they seemed to have on her child's improved communication skills.

She explained that clinicians can support parents not just by telling them what to do, but by demonstrating techniques within their daily activities such as hand washing.

jillb · Answer

Thank you!