Question

@Hero

Answer 1

What the....

Answer 2

so i wrote a couple intro's

Answer 3

I forgot you're not working on math

Answer 4

im in the middle of finishing one so gimme just a second

Answer 5

c'mon :( ..i know you dont want to but please :\

Answer 6

I definitely do not want to.

Answer 7

Just post the stuff

Answer 8

k its not the best but is it an "okay" way to start:

Being tired, sleepy, and inactive while attempting to be educated is simply not fun. Nothing seems interesting, everything seems annoying, and the day just takes forever to be over. When the teacher catches you sleeping in her class, the first time its a warning, the second time its a phone call home, and ultimately you're given a detention.Blah blah blah....

Answer 9

am i on the so-called "right" track is what im asking here

Answer 10

@Hero ....well??

Answer 11

i would say its better than the whole hot cocoa with obama ya mama in PJs lol

Answer 12

so its acceptable?

Answer 13

Well, it's a good start, but this is not a winnable argument

Answer 14

You'd be better off being the antagonist

Answer 15

Being tired, sleepy, and inactive while attempting to be educated is simply not fun. Nothing seems interesting, everything seems annoying, and the day just takes forever to be over. The teachers constantly complain about all the students staring at the inside of their eye-lids. Although some may blame teachers for having poorly-put-together and uninteresting lectures, and others point fingers at uncooperative students, the real reason might just be the lack of sleep. In attempt to solve this dilemma, I would provide students with the privilege of a good old fashioned nap time as it would help make up for the students' lost sleep, make them feel more refreshed and energetic, and even boost creativity, all making for a better learning experience

Answer 16

You can make it look pretty. You can dress it up and put make up on it, but the solution to inattentiveness in class is not naps. It's a combination of a couple things: Getting proper rest and altering the school system so that there's less burden on the student. The school systems should operate more of the way countries overseas do things. They allow students to choose their path much earlier. For example, students interested in programming will do mostly programming in high school. Students interested in performance arts will do that for most of their time in high school.l Students interested in science will do that.

Answer 17

Students take way too many general courses in High School.

Answer 18

i mean i wrote "in attempt to solve"....as in one way such could be helped not completely fixed

Answer 19

Also, schools close too early. School should be open for 18 hours of the day so that students can actually work at their own pace.

Answer 20

Or ahead of the pace if they choose too. Everything should be automated with the exception of performance arts. You can't automate that.

Answer 21

But anyway, I didn't mean to spoil your essay. Good start. But I just wouldn't want to argue about something when I know that I'm ultimately going to lose the argument. They'll never let students nap in school. At least not in public schools.

Answer 22

it doesnt matter if they wiil or will not...they can slow dance with a hybrid chimpanzee-sloth, standing on my head for all i care....does the paragraph sounds good enough to pass as a paragraph was the one and only question asked lol

Answer 23

I'm impressed with it. I think you've demonstrated your ability to write and construct relevant sentences and meaningful statements toward arguing your position. So, yes. And stick with the active writing.

Answer 24

I'm more interested in understanding how this napping program will work during school. Will students all nap at the same time?

Answer 25

im going to take that as a yes and go drug myself to sleep forever

Answer 26

And should the school invest in cots to make naps more comfortable? And what about lunch? Couldn't students nap during lunch if they wanted?

Answer 27

Don't join the debate team. Your argument would get ripped to shreds.

Answer 28

this whole time you couldnt say "yes" or "no" because your main concern was the planning and funding?? you is out of your mind to be playin me like this at 2am

Answer 29

lolz

Answer 30

Your essay is an argumentive one.

Answer 31

i hate arguing and the debate team is never even going into consideration...you may now die in peace knowing this

Answer 32

You're already feeling the pressure.

Answer 33

But you're writing an argumentive essay.

Answer 34

OMG SHUTUP IM GOING TO EXPLODE INTO A BAJILLION PIECES

Answer 35

What did you think would happen. I bet your teacher is going to spend more time asking you questions about how this napping program will work than proofreading your paper.

Answer 36

no actually hes gonna look at it for 43 seconds exact and then say "yes" or "no" and then throw it in the trash......WHICH IS WHY THATS ALL I WAS ASKING YOU TO DO -_-

Answer 37

Sounds like a mean teacher.

Answer 38

no he's amazing but he has his way of grading....eh idk

Answer 39

If he was a real teacher, he would give you ideas to help you further develop the ones you already have.

Answer 40

That's what teachers do. Inspire students to achieve greatness, not shut them down immediately

Answer 41

i forgot to become your fan ^-^