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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Could someone please look over this and revise this or give me tips? Sorry it is sort of long. So I have to attach it as a file.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Try not to starts every paragraph with the or they, make it something that is appealing to the reader

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Alright thank you for your input (:

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