Question

ok how should i start my next chapter

Answer 1

can you show me what all you have?

Answer 2

yea

Answer 3

That might start you off?

Answer 4

ok hold on i think i can add 2 tht

Answer 5

should it b shade or shadow?

Answer 6

there the same thing I believe but you can choose its not me book

Answer 7

true

Answer 8

love it!

Answer 9

really?

Answer 10

should i end it there and start the next chapter or should i just keep adding 2 it?

Answer 11

Add another chapter

Answer 12

kk

Answer 13

now this is my problem i want 2 start the next chapter in a different part of the story kind of like going back a few days but i dont know how 2 start it

Answer 14

Say 2 days before the man in the attic. Then you start off where he was 2 days ago

Answer 15

ok so should i say something like this hold on ill post the link

Answer 16

k

Answer 17

this is how i started it off but i think it sounds bad

Answer 18

How about this for the start?

Answer 19

wait thts wht we had b4

Answer 20

go to chapter 1

Answer 21

wait sry wrong one

Answer 22

yea tht sounds a lot better

Answer 23

ok

Answer 24

but where would i go from there?

Answer 25

maybe talk about what house they live in what it looks like?

Answer 26

ok hold on i started typing already and i think this sounds good

Answer 27

ok

Answer 28

yea that's good

Answer 29

kk i think im gonna add more 2 it hold on

Answer 30

ok

Answer 31

Ill be on tomorrow i gtg

Answer 32

kk ttyl

Answer 33

updated version

Answer 34

@nicolebears

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@Cpt.Sparz

Answer 36

Gs great. Just fix grammer problems and I saw youre in for a good story there. :d

Answer 37

thx so much

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@katie__michelle this is the updated version

Answer 39

WOW thats great :)

Answer 40

ohh okay hang on let me read it

Answer 41

kk tell me if u like it

Answer 42

Yes I love it:)

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really? thx

Answer 44

your welcome..

Answer 45

"I tried to ask who or what it was, but I couldn’t find my voice. I tried screaming, but nothing came out. All I could do was watch " STRESS, EMPHASIZE these EMOTIONS. make your reader FEEL what you are feeling.

My lips were unmovable. nothing came out except for the rapid inhalation of air.. All I could d was watch. ETC

Answer 46

omg tht is so true thx