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Answer 1

Many people’s have seen or heard that people are becoming obese while eating and watching TV. Two articles “Should Fatties” get a room (Even on TV)? By Maura Kelly and another article is “Television is responsible for the obesity Epidemic” by Ron Kaufman. The first article by Maura Kelly talks about to be on TV anyone who is fat should loss the weight. The second article by Ron Kaufman talks about Televisions is one of the reasons children’s and adult’s are over weight.
“Should “Fatties” get a room? (Even on TV?)” by Maura Kelly, she is grossed out about two obese people making out on public or TV. “I think I'd be grossed out if I had to watch two characters with rolls and rolls of fat kissing each other ... because I'd be grossed out if I had to watch them doing anything. To be brutally honest, even in real life, I find it aesthetically displeasing to watch a very, very fat person simply walk across a room — just like I'd find it distressing if I saw a very drunk person stumbling across a bar or a heroin addict slumping in a chair.” She is trying to say that if anyone who are over weight should do some exercise
The message Maura is trying to say people who are over weight on TV should start losing their weight because no one want to see obese people on TV. This article is not persuasive because she telling people what do if you are not fit for Television.
“Television is responsible for the obesity Epidemic” by Ron Kaufman. Television is causing adults and adolescents to become over weight. Since the TV is in front of their faces they will start to food while watching TV. They will spend hours and hours watching TV without doing any physical activity throughout the day. “In 1999, an estimated 61 percent of U.S. adults were overweight, along with 13 percent of children and adolescents. Only 3 percent of all Americans meet at least four of the five federal Food Guide Pyramid recommendations for the intake of grains, fruits, vegetables, dairy products, and meats. And less than one-third of Americans meet the federal recommendations to engage in at least 30 minutes of moderate physical activity at least five days a week, while 40 percent of adults engage in no leisure-time physical activity at all.”
This article is trying to say Television is making people become obese. Since they don't do any excise throughout the day they are starting to become less aware of their surrounding they are starting to eat and eat. Television can be good or bad for people because they become addicted with TV it hard for them to stop right away. This article is persuasive because he uses other sources that Television is making children and adult obese.

I agree with Ron Kaufman because it trues anyone who eats while watching TV gain weight fast.
In Conclusion- People should take care of themselves because it not healthy for them to become over weight. Eating while watching TV is not good for anyone.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

thank you for reading my paper can u read read this one tooThese two main ad talks about do not text while driving because you might hurt someone or hurt yourself. These two ads are describing because of a dumb mistakes someone might get hurt, and it’s your fault. “In fact, texting behind the wheel is so dangerous that it can cut a driver’s response time by 18% or the seconds it takes to miss a stop sign, run an intersection and broadside a family.” While texting and driving you will cause someone’s death and cause the family a heartbreak. The first ad’s in the top shows a cell phone leaking blood on the right side and the left side is a gun. In the top middle is the title of this ad is Russian roulette. In the bottom of the picture it states “A cell phone is a weapon – Whenever you drive a car and use one. It’s that simple and that deadly. Last year, nearly 6,000 fatalities and over half of a million was injuries are caused by distracted driver’s. The background of this ad is white. Below the statistic there is a quote “Whatever you have to say can wait. Unless it goodbyes”. The company name is Cone-net and Auto week. This is ad is showing a gun on the left and a cell leaking blood on the right side. This picture is explaining that you are killing someone in cold blood. This ad is telling the target audience that you should not drive while texting. Below the picture “A cell phone is a weapon – Whenever you drive a car and use one. It’s that simple. And that deadly. The picture and the writing work together to get the appeal because it tells the audience that there are millions of cases of car accident that involves people whom text while driving. This ad is effective because the ad is that it wrong drives without paying attention on the road. This is a logical appeal because it tells the audience that you is careful while driving behind the wheel. The second ad shows blood on the floor and a broken phone with small spot of blood. The floor is white. In the top right hand corner is a quote “This person you are trying to reach is no longer available.” Next to the phone there is a big spot of blood. There is a shadow of a car with some blood on it. This ad is an emotional appeal because this ad shows that someone is going to get killed by a driver who's texting while driving The picture and the writing work together to get the appeal because it tells the audience that there are millions of cases of car accident that involves people who text while driving ad is effective because the ad is that it wrong drive without paying attention on the road. My opinion on this ad’s is that they both show that it’s a bad mistake to kill someone while driving and texting at the same time. This ad shows a good message because it’s telling us that life is short.
In conclusion driving while text is a bad choice because you might kill a person by mistake.