Question

new song:/
kinda need help finishing it kinda graphic.

i know what i did to you i killed you inside. im so sorry thoughs werent my intentions. but thats no reason to kill yourself. so dont take that gun dont pull that trigger please. but if your going to kill me instead. i need you to live. ill count to three. so you can ready aim fire. but before i do theres something i need to say. im soo sorry i hurt you. you deserve so much better. 1...2....3.
im gone im shot i have a bullet in my chest. so listen to my last words while im on my last breath. i hope you find someone better. someone who

Answer 1

*someone who deserves your love.

Answer 2

i honestly love it

Answer 3

really?

Answer 4

DANG GIRLLLL i have a tear in my eye :'( i love it

Answer 5

yeah its perfect, just needs a little more words. to make it longer!

Answer 6

o my gosh :) thank you soo much:) i have alot of songs this is my first time sharing one with anyone. lol do u think you could help me?

Answer 7

okay umm, is this rap, or what wanna make sure i get the feel

Answer 8

no its not a rap i dont rap... lol its hard to explain its like a break up song.

Answer 9

what kinda beat?

Answer 10

message me

Answer 11

kk:)