Question

DOES THIS SENTENCE MAKE SENSE:
Mwivano’s cousin’s former wife identified Mwivano

Answer 1

Theres more to it.

Answer 2

The forensic investigators then put a picture of the face in a grocery store so that someone would be able to recognize the victim. The case was resolved in a serous matter. Mwivano’s cousin’s former wife identified Mwivano. Mwivano’s family was soon notified. They came to the United States for Peter’s trial. Peter was found guilty and sentenced life in prison without parole.

Answer 3

I found my spelling mistakes. Dont have to worry about spelling

Answer 4

The forensic investigators then put a picture of the face in a grocery store so that someone would be able to recognize the victim. The case was resolved in a serious matter. Mwivano’s cousin’s former wife identified Mwivano, and Mwivano’s family was soon notified. They came to the United States for Peter’s trial, and he was found guilty and sentenced life in prison without parole.

Personally I thought there were too many little choppy sentences and so I changed some of them to be in a bigger sentence.

Answer 5

okay

Answer 6

Thanks!

Answer 7

no problem!