Question

Maybe I was wrong maybe you was right i guess it was not worth the fight the fight that you brought me to the fight that cut me too dam it was too soon baby don't you leave to leave to leave baby this is me its me its me baby look around look at me your the one you see wait don't take another step don't take a step out that door if you do I'll throw my fist threw the floor girl please don't im telling you i love you i need you i want you i like you girl i love you i need you i want you i like you stop don't you see this is you and me what a shame that you got me wait theres no shame all i see

Answer 1

some few corrections in there but all in all i think its good

Answer 2

i like it:)

Answer 3

thanks!

Answer 4

I like it its sik:)

Answer 5

great job! Keep writing.. you never know how you'll end up :) Very good job!