Question

hey yo! i need some feedback o'er here!

Answer 1

i've loved and lost
i"ve died inside
maybe one day
i"ll give up my pride

but i wont grovel
or get down on the ground
i wont be makin
one little sound

you cant hurt me
i can take it\
i know that in my heart
your full of s.h.it.
try'n to take me apart
bit by bit
and if'n u was smart
u'd stop bein a nitwit!

word!

Answer 2

nice yo

Answer 3

I really like it! You did a good job.. :)

Answer 4

I LIKE it! =) Great job.

Answer 5

thx guys:)