Question

new poem im just writing this
this is so stressing
I cant help but cry
this life is to depressing
I just wana leave and say bye
I feel under house arrest
writing this isn't making it better
I swear im trying my best
if I go i promise ill write a letter
i don't know if this is gods test
i feel lonely and forgetten
theirs things i wana get off my chest
im so heart broken
cops were here this afternoon
just turn me in please
i rather be in jail until june
my choices u disagree
i never think suicide
i want god to take me when its my time
will it be suicide or homicide
....

Answer 1

@AnaheimNena714 would u mind if i sang this??

Answer 2

sure go ahead but u want me to finish it first?

Answer 3

yeaa

Answer 4

should i comit a crime
i aint suicidal im patience with death
i show no emotion
this is to much stress
i don't wana go thru the motions
need love i confess
wana spread my wings
but i got an ankle bracelet
im a queen i need a king
i am lil impatient
but i hold the pain in
all i need is a lil comfortin
-Joanna Ramirez
ok im done sorry so long hope u like:/

Answer 5

I LOVE IT OMG this is gonna be an awesome song

Answer 6

really i would love to hear it

Answer 7

i will have it 4 u tomorrow

Answer 8

ok then thank u ive been wanting to make these to songs but i don't know how to find the right tune or note

Answer 9

don't worry i got all under control HAHAH

Answer 10

thank u :)

Answer 11

your welcome

Answer 12

any body else plz comment i need to know if i shall continue:/

Answer 13

I love writing sad poems. It's a nice way to get a release. You did a great job. That was an amazing poem. I loved it. Bravo.

Answer 14

You did a GREAT job! You've got talent..

Answer 15

i love it:)

Answer 16

thaks everyone

Answer 17

Amazing.... :') I feel that way sometimes too. But I don't think of suicide... I'm just gonna die and see God, then what is he going to think of what I've just done? Live! :) Fake it till you make it! You can push through this HARD live... God Loves u! :D

Answer 18

yea i get yo uno i cant imagine myself comiting suicide

Answer 19

:) Good! :D Your life is precious. You have a purpose. :D

Answer 20

yea i no im not sucidal i let my time come

Answer 21

:P Good! :D

Answer 22

yep^-^

Answer 23

thats really good

Answer 24

This is really awesome!!!

Answer 25

thank you i hoping to turn these poems to music one day

Answer 26

*New poem *I'm just writing
*This this is so stressing
I cant help but cry
this life is *too depressing
I just *wanna leave and say bye
I feel under house arrest
writing this isn't making it better
I swear *I'm trying my best
*If I go i promise *I'll write a letter
*I don't know if this is *Gods test
*I feel lonely and *forgotten
*there's things *I *wanna get off my chest
*I'm so heart broken
*Cops were here this afternoon
*Just turn me in please
*I'd rather be in jail until *June
*My *choice *you (can)* disagree
*I never think *(of) suicide
*I want *God to take me when *It's my time
*Will it be suicide or homicide *(?)


You should probably complete your English classes before attempting something extra-curricular.

Answer 27

i write how i want to i dont need anybody correcting my writing..i write how i want to many artist write how they want to and i can do it to alight i dont need ur opinion

Answer 28

Don't you post things to get opinions?

Answer 29

yes but not your opinion alight....i dont need corrections from you alight i got people to help me with corrections..let me tell you this music is my getaway it relaxes me and you just annoyed me

Answer 30

Lol love you too <3

Answer 31

pshh...na if only you new me..u wouldnt even talk to me...my thug life isnt made for your lil low life self i dont care about your opinion and never will i have my homies to support me no matter wat after im outa house arrest im free ill go were ever i want and no one can stop me

Answer 32

If you didn't care you wouldn't keep arguing ;D

Answer 33

im not if i was arguing i would be saying alot of mean stuff and well im not if you think wat im saying is mean then ull hate when im mad...i aint up for ur lil Yolo life style i live till the day i die and i dnt live for myself i live for my family ill risk my life for them

Answer 34

Who cares? Im pretty sure no one asked about your fake thug life, how you escape from the world, if your mad, or who you'd die for xD All she did was correct you because you can't seem to do it yourself and I'm guessing no computer is advanced enough to correct some of those mistakes you made... Or were you just trying to make new words altogether?

Answer 35

Oh and no one cares about your "homies" xD haha

Answer 36

shyt two lowlifes pshhh... na you know wat u tricks arent worth the talking to just roll out with your yolo bullshyt i dont got time for this i got people to care for...and heres the shyt i dont need corrections alright my computer corrects me but this is how i write

Answer 37

You us two "low lifes" aren't on house arrest? ;)

Answer 38

*know

Answer 39

Haha what makes you think you're a thug?

Answer 40

im from South Anaheim ive been in Surenos X3 since i was 11 yrs old i no im a chola n if u dont think so come n ill prove it to u alight. im done with this bull alight peaz

Answer 41

I love you.

Answer 42

i cant say the same 4 u cuz i barely no u sorry

Answer 43

What? You expect me to know what any of that is? Lol

Answer 44

I thought you'd love me too.