Question

Soooo It's like, 3am and I'm tired and bored. I sort of wrote this in like 5 minutes and it's FAR from finished but...any ideas? lol

Answer 1

I have like two parts, but I don't think they can go together in the same writing because it would be too repetitive.

1. The moon and the sun, they smile at us as we glance at the stars and share secrets with trust. The first kiss that you stole, I'll never get back...whatever fill in the blank I don't know haha



2. We laid in the grass and made shapes out of stars, we laughed 'til we cried, I never thought there'd be scars. We danced 'till we fell 'n' we kissed in the dark. You told me your secrets the dreams in your heart. "Together" you said is how we'll always be but you took it all back saying you lied to me.


So yeah. Kinda lame, right? Whatever. I'm tired so I claim delirium. But ya know, yolo.

Answer 2

Oh this is just terrible quick close this before others see it xD

Answer 3

Psh I don't need your opinion I got my homies to support me and yeah xD

Answer 4

Don't you post stuff here for opinions? xD

Answer 5

Not yours tho I mean plz I don't even care about your opinions and I never will and whatever else she said xD

Answer 6

Blah blah you just annoyed me blah blah

Answer 7

Yeah. Well, bite me

Answer 8

lol c;

Answer 9

I like them u should try to go farther and continue the second one

Answer 10

No just no

Answer 11

LOL yall trippin it was good... I liked it

Answer 12

Idek what to say now xD

Answer 13

I think it's cheesy and sounds like everything else but whatever xD Thanks to everyone except the unicorn.

Answer 14

I liked it.

Answer 15

These were actually really good. Don't sell yourself short, you've got talent. ;)

Answer 16

Yeah, I think they're really good, as well. :) xD