Question

new poem havent put any up hope you like:
~.~.~.~.~.~.Daddy's Little Girl~.~.~.~.~.~.
i love you so just smile
im Daddy's little girl
you distance should be a mile
he loves my curls
i dont have high standards
my daddy showed me how a man should treat me
most of my ex's are cowards
they attracted to my booty
my daddy raised me right
its ok i dont bite
but for me my daddy will fight
education he want me to have
he said ill be a great nurse
nurse was half of my goal vet was the other half
but i carry my heart in my purse
dont want to show emotion
broken heart cursed
.....

Answer 1

alredy love the first part

Answer 2

no man has taken me to see the ocean
my ex's all gangsters
some treated me like a queen
others i just say laters
my daddy wants my record clean
i might be a big sister but im still daddys little princess
i didnt ask to be princess but if the crown fits
i need for a man to have what my daddy has its kindness
my daddy says youve grown i admit
but i say daddy but im still your little girl
he said no your my world
- Joanna Ramirez
hope u liked :)

Answer 3

thanks @drummerboyswag i think this is the best one ive done

Answer 4

i love it

Answer 5

^_^ thank you *bowing* thank you *bowing* lol

Answer 6

How sweet! I love it, too. ^.^

Answer 7

You did a great job! Love it.. ♥

Answer 8

thank you its was a quick 3 minute thing haha

Answer 9

well if you spend more time on it it'll be perfect :)

Answer 10

i doubt it im not so good

Answer 11

Obvisouly that's not true, it shows right there you are good!! Just put more time in and you'll be perfect..

Answer 12

yea i get that alot but i wana make them somethin special so far my cuzin can make them in to music

Answer 13

you can, just work more on them! you'll get it perfect because you're already good

Answer 14

thanks haha my cousin tells me that too lol

Answer 15

You are! You're really good.. :)

Answer 16

@drummerboyswag say sum lil g

Answer 17

thanks i still have to make more tho lol

Answer 18

go for it1

Answer 19

u shud of seen her other 1s..from earlier this year

Answer 20

@drummerboyswag those werent so good i like this one better than those :)

Answer 21

i almost filled my lil notebook :)