Question

Can you please read my essay about injustice that happened with you or with someone and please tell me how it sounds,and feel free to give me ideas ..Please I would really appreciate it

Answer 1

I think you did a "GREAT" job on this. Bringing personal point of views is always good! :) Good job!!

Answer 2

Thank You for acatully taking the time to read this. I really Appreciate it! :)

Answer 3

Hey no prob! That's what this sites for, others just make it for other things!! If you need any kinda of help let me know, and i'll try to help out! :)

Answer 4

Why Thank You BrittanyFrench!!! You made my day! I was waiting for a response but no one answered me until you. Thank You Once Again..Take Care !!! :D

Answer 5

:) No prob! I'm always here to help!! :) You take care yourself!

Answer 6

Hey BrittanyFrench!! How are you? I was wondering that I know you liked my essay,but if their was something you didn't like or you disliked what would you change? I'm asking this because you are reader and understood the story well,but for me it's kind of hard to imagine what my reader will think after they read story and what my reader may not like about this story. I just needed some ideas.Please . Also if you were writing this story what would you change? and how would you present it?

Answer 7

K, give me a second I'll be back on tonight.. Got stuff to do

Answer 8

okay :D

Answer 9

Oh my goodness I completely forgot to come back on!! I'm so sorry!!

Answer 10

To be completely honest, I wouldn't change anything about it. What readers such as myself look for is the writers personal point of view! And you have some in your essay.. You did great!! Never second guess yoursel.

Answer 11

Thank You so much and it's okay ...Once Again Thank You for giving me your honest opinion. Take Care

Answer 12

No prob! Glad to help.. Remember to always message me if you need anything else. I'm always here.

Answer 13

Aww thank you and yes ofcourse!!

Answer 14

:) good luck with anything else