Question

how would i make this sentence wordier? Most of Steven Douglas's career was apart of his plan to become president

Answer 1

any sugestions would be greatly apprectiated

Answer 2

Wordier? negatively or positively?

Answer 3

nevermind i got it nthank you thiough

Answer 4

Negatively-- use redundant phrases such as: literally, about, probably, adequate number of, the color, and any other unnecessary details.
Positively-- add more information about the subject, describe his plans and his career.

Answer 5

oh! okay. I'm glad you got it figured out :)