Question

New Song "Lived"

Answer 1

Lived:

It's beyond a shadow of a doubt
that the sun will shine through
illuminate the darkness
and make its way to you
freedom is within the truth
and the truth will set you free
I've been told that if you aim for nothing
Your just striving after the wind
In the end you will never win
Chorus:
Unless you work hard
And you find yourself
and pursue what's worthwhile
Then you'll make your life long lasting
and have a great big smile
When you look back
and don't feel empty and deprived
When your life has been lived
Yes, when you’ve truly lived your life
Verse 2:
Now that's my only credential
That you reach your full potential
And never give up
Cause that's the only way
To be happy
And that's how you know
if you've lived
And there’s no way of knowing if you did
Chorus:
Unless you work hard
And you find yourself
and pursue what's worthwhile
Then you'll make your life long lasting
and have a great big smile
When you look back
and don't feel empty and deprived
When your life has been lived
Yes, when you’ve truly lived, your life
Verse 3:
So dontcha ever give up
No cause it’s never enough
To give it all up
And throw your life away
When you can just pray for a better day
Open up the dirty window
And unleash a new opportunity
But you’ll never know what could have been
Chorus:
Unless you work hard
And you find yourself
and pursue what's worthwhile
Then you'll make your life long lasting
and have a great big smile
When you look back
and don't feel empty and deprived
When you’ve lived your life has been lived
Yes, when you’ve truly lived your life

Answer 2

you work hard

Answer 3

ooh i like this! your structure is very good.

Answer 4

Awesome, as always. (; Keep it up!

Answer 5

thank you so much!