Question

Ok this might not look so much like English but it is all i need is some one to help me correct my mistakes plz :)

Answer 1

Inside it's* hurt
It shows it's* strong
Inside it's* asking
Years this heart* others it's*
Sometimes it asks*
It's* ok

Those were the mistakes i saw

Answer 2

On "It's hope as big as grain", it should be "Its hope." No apostrophe. The same thing with It's got no choice..Try "It has no choice".

Answer 3

thank you so much both of u

Answer 4

sorry i got to delete the poem cuz or else my teachers going to think i did plagerism sorry

Answer 5

ok now its my new one can anybody help me with punctuation and spelling?

Answer 6

anything @crazykid1119

Answer 7

sorry got nothin

Answer 8

thanks anyways :(