Question

I am writing a Volunteer Letter to The Marin Marine Mammal Center. How does this sound?

Answer 1

Expectations Essay

As a student from Redwood High School, my expectations for myself are generally high. That is not bad, however, as I learned multiple things about myself while being self-critical. I’ve learned I have high expectations due to the matter of my growth mindset. With this growth-mindset of mine I’ve learned that I appreciate doing hard work and constantly improving, as I love the self-satisfaction I get at the end of doing a task. I’m always up to trying new things, as I have 2 current part time jobs, (A Camp counselor, and A dog walker) where my work is constantly commended.

As a volunteer here, I will be assigned to communicate with other visitors, about animals and etc., while maintaining more than just a positive mood, but more of an enthusiastic and overly-friendly attitude. I will be expecting myself to be more lighthearted to other people’s needs and wants, as I will be working in a much faster paced workplace than I am currently used to. In addition, I will also have to do much animal-care as I clean specific animal spots, observe the animals, weigh them, and feed them, themselves.

What I overall want to get out of this, is an education on marine animals that my school doesn’t heavily provide (From the classes I’m in as a Sophomore), while encouraging other people to take interest in the beauty of aquatic animals. I’m glad that this volunteer opportunity exists.

Thanks for your time,

Paul Gray

Answer 2

That's great. One question, is this the rough draft or final that you put up?

Answer 3

rough draft

Answer 4

You probably shouldn't say I so much, it seems desperate in a way. Sorry if that sounds to open. What grade are you in?

Answer 5

10th and I agree with you

Answer 6

it has to be 250 words or less.

Answer 7

Oh, that makes sense now. I'm in 7th, but I'm advanced. Good, your not offended. : D

Answer 8

hahah I'm not one to get upset. My english is just kinda weak lately, so I was checking if it sounded professional.