Question

This was the first time the last time it's all over I feel the lumps in my throat and the tears come down and as i hold you by the hand i say it's all okay but then my heart skips a beat and i just can't breathe now.

And as i bring back my breathe i start to reminisce I think of the time when we made our song and from my last dieing breathe i start to sing to you.And then you start to cry as i sing this for you.

~ My original, Called From my last dieing breath i will sing this to you.

What you guys think??

Answer 1

I like it :3

Answer 2

woo! :D

Answer 3

Did not know you were so good at it,would love to hear you sing :)

Answer 4

Haha thanks @uri maybe sometimes on youtube i'll sing

Answer 5

And I know who you are.

Answer 6

woooow thats really good @Eli_So_Awsome ! Luv it! <3 :D

Answer 7

haha thanks :D @jasmynarteaga1

Answer 8

@uri i dont understand how you know me

Answer 9

nvm then!

Answer 10

XD! okay