Question

First peom i've posted on here :/

Answer 1

i've given up on life itself
Paralized by the hurt i've felt
there's nothing more this life can do
time to move on and say, "i'm through"
everything I loved, has been taking from me
Giving up is all I can see
My future is fogged from here on out
what's this life all about?
Looking at the dark sky ahead
Keep Going is all that's beens said
Do people understand the things i've lost
and see what this life has cost
I need to move on,
Which way is right and which was is wrong
I don't wanna go thru the motionts
gotta turn ahead and focus
gonna do what's best for me,
and be the very best I can be
Not afraid to be set free
from this paralized heart
I can see needs mended
I may be bent, but I won't break
my broked heart has begun to grow
happiness and love is all I can show

Answer 2

I don't like it :/

Answer 3

its amazing like you

Answer 4

awh *blushing* lol thanks :D But i don't like it..

Answer 5

k then delete it lol

Answer 6

ouch! lol

Answer 7

just want feedback

Answer 8

why you said ouch lol is something wrong lol

Answer 9

you got me lol