Question

New Song i been working on its not done but tell me what yall think

Answer 1

In her mind these niqqas suck out her blood like a fking tick,
its like they cant see the cut she has so deep tht it cant even be stitched,
she believed every lie tht was said to her all coming from her stupid clique, she’s been hurt so many times tht she was forced to build a wall around her heart made out of bricks,
tht when she found the 1 she liked, she was to scared to let him in tht,
she let slip away from her life,
she became upset, mad, sad, over all pissed.
So to get over tht she goes out looking beautiful as can be, looking for a guy to be her first kiss,
but she gets more then wat she asks for,
after tht had happened she takes a test,
tearing up while staring at tht plus sign screaming not this,
she calls the guy to tell him the shocking surprise,
he doesn’t believes anything she says,
he says its all lies,
he claims he never touched nor even seen her,
as he says tht she begins to cry

Answer 2

Thats really good

Answer 3

thanxs, im not done tho........... i need to finish it

Answer 4

i think its fine the way it is

Answer 5

O: DOPEEEEEEEEEEEE

Answer 6

Thanxs

Answer 7

You did a really nice job joyflow!! :D

Answer 8

thanxs

Answer 9

AMAZING!! who you talking about?:)

Answer 10

i wrote it cause they have so many girls who fall just like this and i noticed it

Answer 11

but thanxs @Jenn777

Answer 12

true :)

Answer 13

thats so Fukin good i want to read the rest @joyflow

Answer 14

ok well i need to finish it, i wasnt shure if it was gud enough to finish it thts y i post it here to see if i get lost of likes i'll finish it

Answer 15

its like my life too

Answer 16

OMG nice work Bro :D ♥

Answer 17

thanxs sis

Answer 18

ITs AMAZING BOO BOO! C;

Answer 19

thanxs penguin

Answer 20

amg thas deep. i wanna cry now...another eminem :)

Answer 21

Thanxs Kia

Answer 22

tell me wen yu finish!

Answer 23

iwill

Answer 24

WOW THIS IS AMAZING....!!!

Answer 25

thanxs Esme

Answer 26

you might as well right a big thanks to everyone who ikes this as a whole or youll be thanking evryone all day :) lol

Answer 27

Woahh that was really really super good! I can see why you would write something like this. it does happen to many many girls. Reallllyyyy amazing though!

Answer 28

Lmao hhahahaha yu got me laughing @Jenn777

Answer 29

Yaay! point for me :)

Answer 30

thanxs @hola?
ima made this song to open ppl eyes tht this happens but im going to make it better and wit a gud ending too

Answer 31

good! haha it doesn't really need a good ending because it's already good, but yeah sounds nice!

Answer 32

i mean wit a ending wit encouragement for the girls who gone thru this

Answer 33

that's really thoughtful!(:

Answer 34

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Answer 35

Yea, they need it

Answer 36

they do but they also got to make a choice to wait .

Answer 37

waiting brings reward :)

Answer 38

yea thts tru waiting brings rewards, but still when yu fall yu would want someone to pick yu up, to encourage yu to keep going forward and tht yu can do it no matter yur mistakes

Answer 39

Right does this sound familair ? :)

Answer 40

lmao yea, well everyonr needs a push.... i needed one to and i got it

Answer 41

AND you will aways be getting one from me out of love i love to challenging people cuz i know they can do better :)

Answer 42

lol ok sis

Answer 43

;D

Answer 44

It's Amazing :)

Answer 45

thanxs Ally :)

Answer 46

SPEECHLEESSS *-*

Answer 47

Awwww thanxs Elise

Answer 48

K its determined youll be here all day thanking people LOL! :)

Answer 49

lol Jen making me smile

Answer 50

I WANNA SING THE CHORUS.

Answer 51

*Blush*

Answer 52

lol ima have yu @KiArUnsYu sing the chorus and ima have Eminem spit acouple verses too LMAO :) :D :P

Answer 53

LMFAOOO AYYEE its gon be raw AF. amg we can try to get him! forreal i got some connections

Answer 54

lmao tht would be legit

Answer 55

ikr. dayum i needa get on it den.

Answer 56

lol, ma cousin would go crazy if he got to meet Eminem

Answer 57

My Pretty Boii Gots Too Much Skills

Answer 58

Awwwwwww thanxs @Reppinthe80 AKA Spanky

Answer 59

No Prob Love, But You Know,You Could Always Give Me Some Of That Skill, Cant Keep It All To Yourself Papi (:

Answer 60

Lmao i just started writing like 4 to 5 months ago, its pretty easy i can teach yu and give yu some pointers but i barely scratched the surface of skill :) @Reppinthe80

Answer 61

TEACH ME PWEASE!!! I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER!!!

Answer 62

ok :)

Answer 63

YESH!!

Answer 64

LMAO