Question

Please help me make up a story about the importance of determination. The handouts I received are attached.

Answer 1

@dmezzullo

Answer 2

@ParthKohli

Answer 3

The rough draft, which I must turn in tomorrow, has to be 45 lines long. The final story has to be 26 lines long.

Answer 4

The story map looks like this

Answer 5

I have a good story about a gamer who was in bed, feeling suicidal -- but she treated her life like a game, requesting her boyfriend and sister to cooperate. :-)

Answer 6

Uhm, I do not think my teacher will approve of that. Can you modify it a bit somehow?

Answer 7

Good idea,though.:)

Answer 8

She said there could be fiction stuff in it ssh as talking animals,etc.

Answer 9

*such

Answer 10

This was when she was developing games, and suddenly got a traumatic attack. Then she lay in bed for 3 months.

She didn't want to live; she decided to get rid of herself.

Then she designed a game called SuperBetter in which you treat your life like a game, shooting down enemies and winning small missions.

Answer 11

Hmm. Good!

Answer 12

Then replace the woman with a deer and the enemies with carnivores ;-)

Answer 13

Let us work on it and see how it turns out

Answer 14

No, lol

Answer 15

The gamer sounds better.

Answer 16

Okay, let me set up a google docs so we can collaborate.

Answer 17

Yes?

Answer 18

And don't get a woman. Seems much more fun when you have a teenager!

Answer 19

That'd work, yes. :-)

Answer 20

Yes!!!!

Answer 21

Lol. Brb!

Answer 22

I'm here :-D

Answer 23

One minute,k?

Answer 24

Yes, I have to stretch long enough to type. :-P

Answer 25

OK. LINK:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gO5cP_0e7r4zi1MZRqZWAwanOT_6cqXnAmbmGUbfBmk/edit

Answer 26

@rajathsbhat

Answer 27

Let s talk in the google docs chat, yes?

Answer 28

sure

Answer 29

great.:)

Answer 30

@rebeccaskell94

Answer 31

Would you like to help, rebecca?

Answer 32

Uhmmmm I'm lost with everyone else's replies lol What are you doing? xD

Answer 33

Ok, so we r making up a story about the importance of determination.

Answer 34

We r editing it on google docs. the link is

Answer 35

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gO5cP_0e7r4zi1MZRqZWAwanOT_6cqXnAmbmGUbfBmk/edit

Answer 36

We r doing the rough draft, which has to be 45 lines long.

Answer 37

The final draft has to b 26 lines long. Ive to choose the most important things in the rough draft an minimize them to fit on the final draft lined paper/

Answer 38

@kayluhhrubio_14