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SOMEONE PLEASE REVIEW MY ESSAY

i have to act like a reporter in romeo and juliet and report on scence 1 act 1. please review it

Earlier this morning, on the streets of Verona, a terrible brawl broke out between citizens that are known to have been started by servants of the Capulets and the Montagues: two families with a deeply-rooted rivalry. Bystanders claimed that they mention they have witnessed the events that started it. According to one of the commoners, one of the servants of Capulet made the decision to bite his thumb at a Montague that was strolling the streets peacefully.

Answer 1

This is the rest of it too

From this ancient grudge, the Capulets and Montagues have sought each other out in battle in numerous events. They constantly cause civil outbreaks, and disrupt the peace in Verona. This feud reared its ugly side onto the streets today and most citizens are appalled and say they no longer feel safe to leave their homes. Innocent deaths constantly occur as a result of these disputes. Shortly after the fight, the Prince arrives to halt this and possibly end it. He gave a warning to both families, “If ever you disturb our streets again, your lives shall pay the forfeit of the peace”.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

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Answer 4

.Ofcourse.....Incredible...

Answer 5

awesome job :)