Question

Imagery paragraph?

Answer 1

I was walking on the soft, wet sand of Hamoa Beach just when the sun was at its set. The colors and intensity of the light was enough to give me a feeling of tranquility. The salty smell left a taste on my tongue. I couldn't get enough of the waves crashing against the rocks and the warm brush of wind as it pushed the water my way, rushing through my toes. As I continued down the shore I couldn't help but find the most beautiful shells that I later took home.

Answer 2

Is this as terrible as I think it is?