Question

How is this song, I wrote it myself. it's the first song I have ever written!!! It's called, "What Would You Do".

Angel, you were so perfect
We were always meant to be
It was just perfect
Til the very end

We got seperated
Isolated
I had good news
Til I got YOUR news
Then I got the blues
Cause I'd lost all I had to loose

If I did this to you
What would you do-oo-oo?
Would you try to redo-oo-oo?
Cause I wold for you

You left my heart broken
You left me there chokin',on my own tears
We had lasted so long
What the hell did I do wrong?

Answer 1

wait theres more:

I use to look out my window
Lookin out at the sky, thinking, ohh-oh
Bout tryin to get by
Without you at my side

If I did this to you
What would you do-oo-oo?
Would you try to redo-oo-oo?
Cause I would for you

I hope you now see
What has happened to me
Cause of what you did
Yet you placed your bid
You stood there and watched me fa-all
And now, you lost it all!!!

If I did this to you
What would you do-oo-oo?
Would you try to redo-oo-oo?
Cause I would for you

If I, did this, to you
What would, you do-oo-oo?
Would you try to redo-oo-oo?
Cause, I know, I would,
For you

Answer 2

OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS it is soooooo dead and beautiful! its just wonderful!!! You have a great talent! Keep it up! :)

Answer 3

deep*

Answer 4

sorry typo xD

Answer 5

thank you!!! u remember me, @rumadboy and @rumadboy1?

Answer 6

evergirl, u remember me?

Answer 7

oh ya n i didn't even notice that u changed your username lol XD
yea u commented on one of my songs I think

Answer 8

me email wont go through to verify my account, i keep on resending it though!!!! GRRRRR!!!!

Answer 9

its good

Answer 10

Its soo pretty!!!! keep up the good work!!! :)