Question

Words of emotions
Drifting in and though my open mind.
But nothing really rhymed?
Believe me
for how could it take so long
for your heart to sing it's song
of love.
to me.
I feel alone.
Please hear.

Words of sadness
Are enclosing my once opened mind.
Why did nothing really rhyme?
Believe me
For how could it take so long
For your heart to end it's song
of love.
To me.
I feel alone...
Please hear.

Answer 1

I know it's bad. It's to go with a song I made, which is much better then it's lyrics! :/

Answer 2

i like it, not bad!

Answer 3

Aww, thanks! :) @evergirl though I do believe that your poem's quite a bit better....

Answer 4

You're welcome!

Answer 5

:)

Answer 6

great job!

Answer 7

Aw, thanks! :) @brittanyfrench

Answer 8

(: You're welcome!