A poem by me.. :)

Trust is a very delicate treasure
and you always to slow to see it,
til your heart is split open, and too broken to measure, and you realize its something you really needed.

Try so hard to get it back
but it seems nearly impossible,
you know its important and you miss what you had, because without it life is completely intolerable.

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A poem by me.. :)

Trust is a very delicate treasure
and you always to slow to see it,
til your heart is split open, and too broken to measure, and you realize its something you really needed.

Try so hard to get it back
but it seems nearly impossible,
you know its important and you miss what you had, because without it life is completely intolerable.

anonymous · Answer

It's actually really good. Well done.

anonymous · Answer

Thanks much :)

anonymous · Answer

wow.......u have TALENT girl!!! your poem is soooo true XD

anonymous · Answer

YOU ARE REALLY GOOD????:)

ashleyisakitty · Answer

The ending is pretty blunt, but it was pretty good.

anonymous · Answer

Thanks :)

anonymous · Answer

would someone snswer MY question plzz?

anonymous · Answer

This is a truthful poem :) Great job.

anonymous · Answer

thanks!!

anonymous · Answer

this is a great poem! i'm sure there are a lot of people who can relate to it, good job :)

anonymous · Answer

great job, but there are some grammar errors.

anonymous · Answer

haha ok thanks. :)