Question

MY NEWEST POEM!! <3









I can't believe the pain I see
will stay forever and torture me.
The things I see in all my lifetime
will stay here together, trapped in mind.
As happy as my outside seem to be
my insides laugh and taunt at me.
Hoping to see the day I break
urging for my never awake.
But i am strong, Titanium you see?
NOTHING AND NO ONE WILL GET THE BEST OF ME.

Answer 1

1ST COMMENT LIKE A BAUS!! WIFEY, STOP BEING SO TALENTED RIGHT NOW!! HEHEHE OH EM GEE, YOU SO GOOD!! ERGGGG

Answer 2

So Dope _!

Answer 3

Lmao mari i cant.... :) n thanks chris!

Answer 4

niiiiiiceeeee

Answer 5

THANK YU.

Answer 6

Nice, lol I wanna write a song now.

Answer 7

I love it!!

Answer 8

HEHEHE thanks guys :)

Answer 9

when i read this it touched my heart

Dont stop the good work you are bound to be more famous than edgar allen poe

Answer 10

awh XD thanks so much! its funny tho cause Edgar Allen Poe is my favorite!

Answer 11

this is tight.i like it

Answer 12

thanks.

Answer 13

ABSOLUTELY Beautiful :')

Answer 14

Nice!

Answer 15

you should continue this and make a song out of it or something... I love it!

Answer 16

love it ;)

Answer 17

Wow, Good job! :)