Question

My First Poem

Please read for medal if best comment

Answer 1

Note i have to write it inot the computer so this wil take 30 - 40 minutes

Answer 2

In The Morning Dawn of the day

By Joshuajune2


In The Dawn Of the day
gibbs had a rusty way
in the dawn of the day of may
good men pay
In the dawn of the day of may
They Had miles to go in this Day of may
They Had promised to keep in this day in may
A hope and a dream
They missed that day in may

The end

How did you like it ???

Answer 3

It's good for a rhyming poem, it has a strong point but you might want to write a poem someone can relate to! give it a try, for instance, about life struggles or life. I write lots of poetry, you can ask me to give you examples anytime.

Answer 4

ty for the compliment and advice

Answer 5

ty @montrealgurl

Answer 6

anytime!