Question

Can someone look at my poems and tell me if it's descriptive?

Answer 1

Worst Mexican Pizza Ever
A soggy tortilla crust, moldy cheese, and discolored lumpy sauce
Add some rotten tomatoes, artificial refried beans, and a side order of shame.
The “so-called” spicy seasonings were too tame.
The total cost? $7.95! What a rip off for something that’s lame.
 
Derpy Hooves
A bubble cutie mark, gray skin, and yellow hair.
His unique Derpy Eyes is stylish and full of flair.
His favorite treat is a bran muffin, not a cupcake
So make muffins because it's not hard to bake

Answer 2

@AccessDenied

Answer 3

@montrealgurl

Answer 4

These are very descriptive, very vivid. I can imagine the food in details. It was a good job, obviously, this isn't supposed to be a "relatable" poem, but it's good for a description.

Answer 5

Did you want rhyming or not?

Answer 6

ummm the assignment was suppose to be to write a descriptive poem...and the two poems are separate

Answer 7

shame tame lame they're related lol

Answer 8

now this I think is scary





 
The Forbidden Fifth Floor
I dare you to walk up the murky stairs and explore
the isolated room, dirty walls, and the icky tile floor.
Smell the putrid stench of coffee and cigarettes.
And meet a lonely old man who loves to play tricks.

Answer 9

lol, well they both work and are very vivid! They're good. :)
That is creepy!

Answer 10

that's my adviser's office...lol

Answer 11

the strangest floor ever. no additional classrooms just a garage like closet

Answer 12

I wouldn't want to go there then..lol

Answer 13

some of my friends say it's a mess...papers everywhere and it's dark