I have a sentence that I want to sound more technical, but Can't think of other way to put it: "This would also give the U.S the advantage of (penetrating through Anti-Aircraft filled Bases)...
*The Parenthesis is what I want to Change*

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I have a sentence that I want to sound more technical, but Can't think of other way to put it: "This would also give the U.S the advantage of (penetrating through Anti-Aircraft filled Bases)...
*The Parenthesis is what I want to Change*

anonymous · Answer

This would enable United States forces to penetrate hostile anti-aircraft bases; a serious advantage. 1) If you go with "U.S." be sure to place a period after the "S," unlike your example. 2) Anti-aircraft is not capitalized in the sentence as I have constructed it; "bases isn't either.

slicknik · Answer

Thank you.