Question

New Poem :3

Answer 1

You've been a little out of touch with reality
What's it gonna take for you to see
That isn't real
It's all a facade
Everyone's just out for the kill
Each one having their own desire
Grab the hose and put out the fire
Douse it with water
Because everyone's looking for a solution
An everlasting resolution
To rid themselves of vanity
Because people everywhere are on the brink of insanity
And its a crazy world
We're all longing for absolution
And we're all in search of a lasting solution
Because right now this world's full of pollution
We're all contaminated with unresolved problems
Well whose gonna solve em'
How are we gonna dig ourselves outta of the pit
How are we gonna get outta the whole
How an we make this world whole
This is everyone's goal

Answer 2

typos: How are we gonna get outta the hole*
How can* we make this world whole

Answer 3

Super good!

Answer 4

Thanks!

Answer 5

No problem! Do you make anything out of them?

Answer 6

like songs or anything?

Answer 7

Yes! All the time! :D

Answer 8

Nice... lol you say that like I should know :P

Answer 9

lol

Answer 10

Omg awesome

Answer 11

thx

Answer 12

amesome aww

Answer 13

you're so good dude (:

Answer 14

thanks dude :)

Answer 15

this is tight elise.

Answer 16

Thanks Matt!

Answer 17

np

Answer 18

Great job love it well duh! i always lov ur song s and poems! :)

Answer 19

Gracias mi amor :3

Answer 20

De nada Elise te quiero mucho <33333 :) im working on typing a new poem if u wana read :)

Answer 21

Sounds good I can't wait to read it!!! And yo tambien <33333

Answer 22

hahah lol :)

Answer 23

i love spanglish lol

Answer 24

Me too lol

Answer 25

lol :)