Question

latest poem

Answer 1

hopelessness
is all i see
in a room of four walls
full of doubt
i feel like i've been cut loose
from what was once a strong rope
now the nuse is over my head
and im living in a life of dread
how the heck am i supposed to cope like this?!
what am i to do?!
i thought i gave my all to u!
but no it wasn't enough
well enough is enough!!
I've gotta break outta hear
name calling ain't what i wanna hear
and i never used to be so scared
i wanted to continue
but i guess it was in vain
cause you've got me going insane
my heart's been stripped from my chest
each vein clipped and suppressed
I feeling really depressed
and the flame red in your eye
and sharp tone in your voice
makes me wanna cry
the fire and heat your giving me
has singed my soul
I'm disisenigrating to nearly nothing
and I will never be whole again

Answer 2

:'( so sad but its a great poem. youre a great writer brando!

Answer 3

thanks :D ik sorry i wrote this in a bad mood...

Answer 4

Very Good I tryed Poetry but Im no good my Aunt is but I am no where near as good as you guys.

Answer 5

This is how I feel right now :P

Answer 6

yea i know how ya feel...

Answer 7

its soooooooo good

Answer 8

thanks :