Question

New Song

Answer 1

Buildings tumbling fast
all hope seems out of grasp
I got a loose hold on this life
and im loosing ground fast
just rid me of all pain and strife
I got've get a move on and better make this life last
cause i know the storm clouds will soon pass
despite my falls and failings
the trembles and wailings
of a depressed soul
I'll endure this battle and remain whole
even when I've fallen
and nothing but darkness has risen in front of me
my faith won't be stolen
no this spec of hope will embolden
and it embodies me
when i least expect it, it hits me
out of the darkness the light becomes clear
and i no longer fear
cause He's here
When it seems like all is vanity
And I'm on the brink of insanity
He guides me
He provides me
With a new hope
With strength to cope
With a long rope
He pulls me up
When I'm down
Downtrodden
When everything's gone rotten
even when I've fallen
and nothing but darkness has risen in front of me
my faith won't be stolen
no this spec of hope will embolden
and it embodies me
when i least expect it, it hits me
out of the darkness the light becomes clear
and i no longer fear
cause He's here
In the face of distress
When my whole life's a mess
When I'm under a lot of stress
He picks me up
He lifts me up
He makes it good when life gets tough
He rubs me off when I'm just a diamond in the rough
And I don't fear
When He's here

Answer 2

It's called: Father

Answer 3

Lovely, well done.

Answer 4

Thank you! :)

Answer 5

I think you mean new poem. Unless you have a melody. In which case, I'd really like to hear it.

Answer 6

By definition this can be called a song @tanner23456

Answer 7

can it though? let's take a look at definition.

song: A short poem or other set of words set to music or meant to be sung

while a song does require a poem, they are two different things. It says right in the definition that music or in other words a melody is required for it to be considered a song.

Answer 8

Elise this is really good im very proud of you :)

Answer 9

This is very well done. It has great potential. I hope to hear what you come up with.

Answer 10

Thank you

Answer 11

This is really good id love to hear you sing it :)

Answer 12

oh thank you!

Answer 13

Get it! i can imagine this. i am a musical critic in my own right and i value ingenuity.