Question

New Poem

Answer 1

I still don’t know,
What to do when I’m around you.
With your beautiful smile,
And those gorgeous eyes.
I wish I could freeze that time.
The time we caught each other,
Starring and just wait.
Wait until those wet drops,
Start running down my face again.
They will touch my soft blushed cheeks,
They will make me realize.
Realize that you are the wind,
That I am making a mistake.
Making myself look like a fool.
Maybe I am dreaming of you.
Maybe just maybe one day I can catch you.
Then it hits me,
You are the wind I can never catch you…

Answer 2

:O valentine i love it! lol<3

Answer 3

Thanks boo lol :)

Answer 4

nice

Answer 5

thanks

Answer 6

wow amazing

Answer 7

DA-BOMB !!!!!!!better than mine

Answer 8

That's really good!

Answer 9

thanks guys :) your all so supportive

Answer 10

Great job, very interesting and expressive. Great setup for a good melody. This has potential for sure.

Answer 11

Thank you!