Question

need a title for these poems

Answer 1

@ Tahmina

I can help you out here! i love poetry. :) Give me just a sec, 'kay?

Answer 2

okay ill wait for you!

Answer 3

Okay! :)

Answer 4

are u reading my poems?

Answer 5

Here's what I think... First, did you write these? If so, you write well! :) I loved the simplicity of the poems, yet, you were able to use metaphor and thing like that without trying to get TOO deep. poetry can be tricky to write, so you should feel great that you mastered this concept! ;)

Titles:

For "Summer," I REALLY liked the metaphor you used, so I think you should use it as your title: "The Veins of Summer." :)

"Without You" - I actually think this title really sums it up. Or, you could go another approach and call it "The Flameless Fire." Some poets use the first or last phrase in their poems to title their poems.

"Chocolate Cake" is a good (and cute title). However if you want to make it artsy or whatever, you could call it "Like Chocolate Cake."

And Trees - i think that is just great, or you could use"Branches of Love." :)

What do you think?

Answer 6

I LOVE IT

Answer 7

THANKS YOU SOO MUCH

Answer 8

I LOVE THE ONE "VEINS OF SUMMER"

Answer 9

hello?

Answer 10

you are REEALLy creative i just can tell by one replie

Answer 11

happy valentimes day! thanks so much and your the best

Answer 12

oh, crumbs! I'm sorry! Had to pick up my little Brother! :D

Answer 13

Ha ha, thank you for your compliments - but hey, it was YOU who wrote the poems! You gave me the ideas based on how well you wrote them! You rock, and have a happy Valentine's day! :D